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random picture prompt. July 2, 2009

Filed under: fun :),writing exercises — Eden Tyler @ 12:33 pm
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so I entered this on someone else’s blog.
I won’t say what I think of the judge, but…yeah…..

anyway, here are the prompts.
there are three and all had to be incorporated in the story.
rather than just write the obvious (about fraggle rock and a deformed animal), I came up with something different.

I didn’t edit it, but that’s how these things work. so I’ll leave it unedited for this post, as well =)

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Little Maggie ambled along as quickly as her awkwardly shaped legs would allow. Her mother held her right hand, trying to keep Maggie close, while Clara, the mangled, orange, pig-tailed doll that had been around Maggie’s entire life, dangled from her left side. Clara was Maggie’s favorite thing in the world, but the little girl’s arm was just too tired at the moment even to hold such a light object, so Clara’s limbs dragged the ground.

As the family—Maggie, her mother, and her father, who walked on the opposite side of her mother—walked down the dirty streets of Mexico, Maggie wished she was at home curled up in her cozy, pink bed with Clara. Sweet Clara, who calmed her and kept her safe during the hard times. The times when the pain was almost unbearable. But, alas, the doctor believed a trip would be good for Maggie’s illness, so here they were, on their way to see Chichén Itzá. Her father’s pick for their first stop. Next, they would visit Costa Rica, a place her mother had always dreamed of going. Maggie wondered why no one asked her where she wanted to go. This trip was, after all, for her, right?

JUNE 26, 2009 3:56 PM (Eden Tyler)

 

oh, another thing… June 29, 2009

first five sentences are up — 16 submissions are posted.
stop on by and give your thoughts =)
(as of right now, there’s only one post above the first critique, so they’re easy to find…)
i’m sure all the writers would appreciate it

xx

 

new blog. June 22, 2009

Filed under: Uncategorized — Eden Tyler @ 12:04 pm
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so, I guess I’m starting yet another blog…
I use google for a lot of things, so I decided I’d try a blogspot.
We’ll see how it goes. I’m going to post something I’d drafted for giveagirlapen over there…
Check it out!

I think I might do a serial novel…possibly.
We’ll see what happens.
I keep giving myself so much to do….
—thankfully, pressure and time restrictions are great motivators for me!
If you do head over there, please answer my poll on the left.
Thanks, ya’ll!!

xx

 

first Official giveagirlapen.com post!! June 14, 2009

So, it’s past midnight, and my scheduled post for giveagirlapen.com has appeared!!
I’m rather excited—very cool to see your name as an author on a site you don’t own =)

Now for the hard fun part. I’m off to write the story I requested of other readers/writers. I can’t be remiss in my duties, now can I?? ;)

PleasePleasePlease check it out HERE.

Thanks a lot. Greatly appreciated!!!

p.s. i just realized i wrote regularly (i.e. not all lowercase letters).
odd—must be because i was busy writing ‘for real’

 

firsts on fridays on give a girl June 12, 2009

it was too perfect to not use..
(oh, no!!  –split infinitive!!!)
so, I have another excerpt from Avalon posted.
really short one. have a look!!

http://giveagirlapen.com/exercise-in-writing/firsts-on-fridays-3

giveagirlablinkie

thanks!! =)

-xx

 

character. March 5, 2009

There is so much to character it’s ridiculous!!
If you do not develop a character and  have a great plot, your story will be unbelievable.  This I know just from being a reader.

Now, trying to be a serious writer, I realize how much you truly  have to invest in even secondary characters.
So, tomorrow I’m going to do some exercises for my characters during my 7-8 hr road trip (no, I won’t be the one driving).

I’m reading a new book by Nancy Lamb called The Art and Craft of Storytelling and she gives amazing tips so I’m going to take her advice for this part of my novel.

First part is a brainstorming list for creating characters.

For each character, these things need to be determined…
*personality
*defining traits
*origin
*home - frex city or subarbs 
*shelter – what kind of house
*family constellation
*best friends
*interests
*dislikes
*favorites
*hobbies
*clothes
*names – like nickname..
*body language

Then, ask yourself lots and lots of questions about your character.  frex ‘how do these traits indicate emotional conflict?’
dang…this will be an exercise..and I’m not even done listing what I have to come up with.

These questions are even more important:
*what does the main character want the most?
*what obstacles must the character overcome?
*what makes the character memorable?
*how does the hero save herself?

Good thing I have a lot of time cause I’m gonna need it!  But I’m excited because I have the story pretty much done in my head, I just need to get it written down and that will be accomplished thru character’s action..  Wish me luck!