this is one of my faves.
about a month ago, a fellow writer read the first 15k of my book and this is what he had to say::
*****
Eden … you use a palette of many, many colours. All bright, vivid and hugely attractive. You transported me. I lived in this world of yours, and I was the better for it.
You work is daring: it has me on edge. You must write more. You plan to, right? You will, right?
You are lyricism too. You writing flows, even though the story is complex, and the world is detailed and so different, you manage to lead me along effortlessly. You have enthralled me, tweaked my own imagination, and brightened my week-end considerably. Thank you so much.
Please make this rise. Grab the attention of folks on here, and of agents and publishers. Do do do. Wanna see you in Borders. Okay?
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this says it all!! August 30, 2009
Tags: book cover, comment, eden tyler, feedback, review, the abandoned edge of avalon
well, i was going to post a picture of my new book cover today, but i’m gonna give you a link instead.
i received such a cool comment today and this is what the reviewer (a fellow writer) had to say — check it out!
i decided to go with adult fiction (alexis is now 24) with a thriller twist and the book feels right to me now. so right! and others are seeming to agree.
and i adore my new cover. fits the book soooo well.
k, i’m off for the day — out with the family =)
it’s so nice out!!
talk to y’all later
xx