the whole shebang…

the ins and outs & ups and downs of a new novelist's journey

In a Nutshell: Synopses Suck!! July 18, 2010

Seriously… I mean, I get the point. I do. No agent nor editor wants to read through an entire manuscript just to find out the plot falls apart or the ending sucks, but it’s just so….tedious….formulaic. Things I don’t like.
I’m not an outline type of gal. I have a basic premise for a book or a story, and I start writing. I see where it goes. I fix continuity as I see problems arise. So far, I’ve been lucky enough to have characters with certain qualities that come in handy later on. I don’t plan these things—they just happen. I’ve never been an outline fan.

I am, I must say, working on a basic plot, from beginning to end, for the sequel to Avalon (which I had NO intention of writing but so many ideas came to mind and I’m not ready to let these people go, so I’ll give them a bit more life…). So yeah, there’s a sequel…and it just kind of happened. I was like, ‘what about this, though?’ – ‘oh, and this could soooo easily happen.’ So now I’m forced to write it. I’m not in control….these dang characters are. Sometimes I swear they’re more real than I am :P

Back to the point, though… When I started the first book, I had an idea and I figured out the ending, but the middle, well, it just came as I wrote. I saw the scenes play out in my mind and I typed away, writing what was happening. This time, though, I have a more defined idea of what will occur. One, because I can’t not think about it, and two, because I have a bit more experience writing and I know the process will go quicker this way. Most likely I’ll drift off the path a bit as the characters go their own way, but I’m looking forward to it :)
The main difference between this book and the first is that I have NO idea what the ending is…so that will be interesting to see what comes about. In fact, I literally just wrote down something else that came to mind. Something that wasn’t dealt with in the first book. Avalon is definitely a stand-alone novel, but there are issues that can be dealt with in another story, so that’s what I’m doing…. O.K., enough of that.

Back to the *original* point. Formulas. Synopses. These things suck! Queries, eh, not so much. I like mine. I have a few versions, depending on who I’m submitting to, but this whole synopsis thing. It’s for the birds, as my grandma would say (and actually did yesterday, while talking about this Ridiculous heat wave we have going on!).
My favorite are the agents who don’t require them. Don’t get me wrong, I’m working on mine and I’ll have it ready—I have to since I’m submitting a partial tomorrow, but I just had to vent that I don’t like them at all. I want to write. Not put together a proposal, or presentation, in order to sell something. I’m not a salesman. I’ve worked retail…I’m the type that’s honest. If something isn’t right for the person, I’ll tell them. So how am I supposed to sell my book.
Oh yeah, that’s right. I’m beyond in love with it and have confidence and faith that others will see the spark it contains. So we’ll see. Now I’m off to pretend I’m back in college, writing an outline for some stupid paper I don’t have any desire to write. Wait, that’s not true. I like writing…no matter what it’s about. It’s the outlines that I hate.
And the synopses. So there ya go.

xx -e*

 

my new pitch. September 21, 2009

the hook::
Visions of another dimension usher a young woman through an adventure of immorality, virtue, and self-discovery.

* * *

the pitch::
Alexis has always experienced intense dreams. They used to be all sunshine and rainbows, but lately they’ve entered a much darker, depraved realm.

The dreams are actually visions, intended to prepare her for the truth. The reason she’s felt so different since she was a child…
Avalon, an other-world where faeries live, is her real home. Brought into the human realm when she was born, she’s lived that life for twenty-four years.
But now it’s time to venture back with her kind.

A horrible evil has been brewing — waiting just for her.
Something is killing humans and she’s the only one who can stop it.

While attempting to do so, and learn her new place in the universe, she meets up with other, helpful fae. But one shows her that their true nature is to test the limits and mess with the balance.
Will she be able to stay strong and save the humans?
And what will she do when she finds the way to protect them means subjecting some of her own to a horrible death?
She must choose between her two worlds. Which is the right choice?

 

new blog. June 22, 2009

Filed under: Uncategorized — Eden Tyler @ 12:04 pm
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so, I guess I’m starting yet another blog…
I use google for a lot of things, so I decided I’d try a blogspot.
We’ll see how it goes. I’m going to post something I’d drafted for giveagirlapen over there…
Check it out!

I think I might do a serial novel…possibly.
We’ll see what happens.
I keep giving myself so much to do….
—thankfully, pressure and time restrictions are great motivators for me!
If you do head over there, please answer my poll on the left.
Thanks, ya’ll!!

xx

 

how about a free critique?? June 21, 2009

After my ‘first five pages/sentences’ post on giveagirlapen.com, Liz has decided to offer the chance for writers to send us girls your own first five sentences.
She will post them, with her critiques, on the site on June 28th.
This will give all writers the chance to receive help—to start with the best hook possible. We’re all here to network and root each other on && this is a great way to take advantage of that!!
Check out Liz’s post, which states the exact rules, and send in your work to ifyougiveagirl@gmail.com by June 27th.

I look forward to seeing what everyone has written. I love critiques—so much fun =)
I’ll be posting my first five sentences, as well, and hope that ya’ll will help me out, along with Liz! I welcome all advice—it’s always nice to see all views and take what makes sense to me and use the info for necessary changes…

Have a great Sunday, and Happy Father’s Day to those celebrating today.
Remember, if you give a girl… isn’t just for girls. We’re looking for any and all writers. So send your stuff in!!
I’ll talk to you all tomorrow!!

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*p.s. — is it just me, or is this really weird that the one post that i was sooo ridiculously insecure about is the one that’s garnered the most attention, turning into not one, but four posts!?!?!! Craziness!!!
just goes to show that we all need to have confidence in ourselves!!!

 

my heart. June 16, 2009

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so, i found this on penny lane’s blog.
i wasn’t tagged to do it, but since i’m doing awesome with my writing at the moment, i don’t want to jinx it by writing any of avalon or anything else on here..

these are the instructions::
“with as much creativity as you can muster, show your heart in:
a picture, a poem, a song (or piece of music), a phrase (or quote), an item of clothing, a place, and (just for fun) a Disney princess.”

let’s see what i can come up with…


picture::

polly

this picture is from along came polly.
polly can never find her keys. she’s lived in her half-unpacked apartment for months now and is just as scatter-brained as can be.
but she’s also sweet and loveable and lives her life with passion.
she’s brutally honest and doesn’t makes excuses for anything.
every time i watch this movie, i swear i’m watching myself — except for the whole commitment thing. i have no problem whatsoever with commitment. i adore being in a serious relationship. i’ve hardly ever been single my entire life.
but yeah, this picture—this character—is a perfect depiction of me.
style and all…

poem::

Pretty

There is a pretty girl
on the
Face
of the magazine
And
all I can see
are my dirty
hands
turning the page

i was going to choose a different poem, but it was entirely too personal to put online.
while looking through the same book of poetry, i came across this one, which has always resonated with me. everything jewel (kilcher) writes seems to touch me. i’ve loved her dearly for years and years.
this poem in particular just shows how i (and probably every other female in existence) feels. no matter how good i am at something, or how ‘pretty’ i think i might be a certain day, i still don’t feel ‘up to par.’
there are many different reasons for this. some external, but mostly internal…something i definitely need to work on!!

song::

so, i just chose a short portion of a song.
it’s actually rather lame as far as the writing goes, but it’s sooo me it’s ridiculous.
here it is:

“…i’m always, always, always, always late.
and my hair’s a mess, even when it’s straight”

see, told ya. lame. (it’s ashlee simpson.) but it’s beyond true.
i swear i’ll be late to my own funeral.
eden time is whatever time it is plus ten to fifteen minutes, minimum..
and yeah—i have curly hair, but tend to straighten it.
doesn’t matter cause i usually end up pulling it back; it just always gets ridiculously annoying.
my guy likes it curly, so it’s even more fun pulled back like that :P
i actually have rather nice hair — thick and full, so it’s never ‘technically’ messy, but it always feels a mess to me. i can’t stand it.
but, at the same time, it’s me. so i love it. yeah, idk…. ;)

phrase::

“The gift of fantasy has meant more to me than my talent for absorbing positive knowledge.
– Albert Einstein

i don’t believe einstein needs any explanation….

*–*–*i have to run to target to buy the newest season of family guy and then to b&n to pick up a new copy of the princess bride. for some reason, i’ve never read the book. i’m going to read it for the once upon a time III reading challenge. then i’m heading to a friend’s house to visit YAY!
so, i’ll be back later and i’ll finish the last three then =)*–*–*
k, i’m back !!
an item of clothing::

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my man’s dc hoodie.
most comfortable fracking thing in the entire world.
we both wear it constantly.
i love that it smells like him & he loves that it smells like me.
it’s the best!!!
it makes me happy and it totally defines both my clothing style and my relationship. and the fact that comfort is more important to me than most other things.
if i’m comfortable, i’m content with who i am and what i’m doing at the moment. that’s why i’m wearing it right now. i’m writing and wearing this—what could be better?!?!?? =)

***here’s another fave item that i just had to add..***

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love ‘em! beyond comfortable.
and brown&&pink is one of the best color combinations in existence.
i’m rather big into color…

a place::

Prince Edward Island

i would be ridiculously happy if i could live in green gables with anne and matthew—except he’d still be alive.
the place is gorgeous!!
it’d be extremely conducive to writing and other such things i enjoy…
yeah…that’d be nice…..
i adore being alone, yet having the choice of enjoying the company of those i love whenever i want. and in this day and age, i could be isolated there with fabulous people, but still interact with others through the internet&&phone.
what could be more perfect? …at least for me.

a Disney princess::

i’m sorry, but i can’t pick a princess.
i can pick a Disney character who is a girl, though.
i’m trying, but i can’t find myself identifying with any of the princesses…
so, i have to choose:

Tinkerbell

i’m not totally in love with Disney’s version of tink, although i do love her movie. it’s quite fabulous!!!
i adore brian froud’s version of tink.
i’m pretty sure i have a picture…

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yes, this is the tinkerbell i would love to be.
if i could be anything in the world, it would be a faery.
i’m crazy obsessed with the entire fae realm and everything to do with faeries. loveitloveitloveit!!

—well, i suppose that’s the end.
got done just in time cause it’s almost tomorrow.
i’m super exhausted, but i’m desperately wanting to write..or at least edit…
maybe i’ll post some of those pages i was talking about.
nite, all!!
tty2mrw =)

xx -e*

 

prologue June 6, 2009

I posted the most recent version of my prologue on my Goodreads site.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/43068.The_Abandoned_Edge_of_Avalon

I did this because I’ve made the book private on Authonomy for a while. Just until I get some more work done on it..

if you choose to read my beginning, here’s a big thank you for ya!!
xx  -e*

 

giveagirlapen.com June 6, 2009

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I’m a guest blogger today!!!

I wrote about staying true to yourself and your idea for any and every story you write.
Of course, suggestions are helpful, but I found out the hard way that not everyone knows what they’re talking about…
And hey–sometimes we ourselves don’t know, but I’d rather make my own mistakes than mess up my book because I listened to someone else who doesn’t know my characters as well as I do..

here’s the link:: http://giveagirlapen.com/guest-blogger/snap-to

check it out!!

 

newer working title. the last one ’til someone else decides for me. March 16, 2009

I’ve gone through three revisions now, and am about to post the 1st 1,500 words on goodreads so that I can get a bit more feedback before I send it off to the Midwest Writers Workshop for a fellowship. If I get one of the nine spots, I’ll get a weekend retreat for free. I’m not counting my chickens, but one has to try all avenues.

I’m even more excited about finishing the next couple thousand words of my book because then I can upload it to Authonomy for reviews and ranking. I adore feedback of all kinds – unless someone is just being mean and pretentious for no good reason, and I have encountered this. Well, not personally, but I’ve stood up for others when I see it happen as there is absolutely no excuse for it.

- Oh, yeah. I almost forgot the final working title:
‘The Abandoned Edge of Avalon’

 

new working title. March 13, 2009

Filed under: Progress! — Eden Tyler @ 10:29 am
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The Forgotten Fae

Also, I now have ~6k done & my 1st 1500 are completely revised! They have to be in order to apply for a fellowship coming up. Of course, I could easily not get it, since there are only 3 spots for my genre, but no matter what, the pressure is gettin’ my butt in gear. I’m about 25 pp in – only 225 or so to go …HA!
But I’m lovin’ every minute of it!