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picture prompt II June 20, 2009

so here was the picture for this story::

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689-ugly-twins

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Just as I had each night before, I walked down the wide hall of the ancient building.
Every day for almost a month. Such a long one….

I’d thought I had wanted to help, but as my time there neared, relief slowly escaped my body.
Bit by bit. More so as the sun rose—preparing me for a new day.
Back at the university, I would ask my counselor for help with a new career path.

Trying desperately to look at the tiny medicine cups and avoid my periphery, I made my way along.
Not an easy task. The one squeaky wheel on my cart added to the chill in the air.
I couldn’t help but look up. The screams and moans at my sides pierced straight through to my bones. The mumbled jargon.
The window was ahead. It helped me remember I wasn’t stuck. In that place. With those people.

A few steps ahead, just under that same arched window, a perfect crescent moon reflected on the tile of the cruelly cold hospital.
Weren’t these men tortured enough? The least that could be done was to create a comfortable atmosphere.

I neared the end—my duty just starting.

Taking a deep breath, I held it in while I grabbed the first cup.
All lined up in order. Room numbers scribbled in Sharpie on the side.
Letting the breath out, I slowly turned.

I walked up to the man, grateful I would only have to see his face three more times. Just three more shifts.

Or so I thought. People like that sear into your memory, whether you want them to or not.

By Eden on 06.02.09 10:08 pm |

 

One Response to “picture prompt II”

  1. Essex Council Building? It’s fast approaching midnight. My twin with me in spirit down right. There’s your shadow brother. I knew this shit would happen. We get too plastered walk away abnormal. And I go again, slurring my speech to the people on the sidewalk with their nice coats and smiles all the time.

    What, Happy? I’s downright twisted…like a bullet…32 special That’s right!!! What you got AIDS? Why so surprised? Go on,…get!!! Fucking civilians. Go back to the ‘burbs… I’m just pimpin’…!!! ahahahahahahahahaha…..

    Speaking of twisted, gotta stop down this dark alley… have it my way. Roll a freakin’ joint, chill for ’bout ten maybe fifteen. Shit I might even pass out down here fahgedaboudit. It ain’t that wet.

    Ahahahaha. lololol. SHEeit. What Lola wants Lola gets it. Ahaha. Shit! I gotta sit down! Damn you Jack Daniels and cocaine. This is some gooood weeed though. But, how the hell am I gettin’ home?

    Not tonight, tomorrow maybe. But not tonigh…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..


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